True to her pessimistic prediction, the sun had set by the time she reached the treeline, and she laboured up the rocky, snow-sprinkled slope in the dark. Soon the moons rose and cast their silver light, giving an eerie shine to the rust-coloured rock of the rest of the Blood Mountains that stretched away in a long range, far to the north, and the river with the same name that ran through them.To discover the source of the song, come back next Saturday for the continuation of this scene!
Yarrow stopped to look at the view behind her several times, and wondered what lay further north, beyond the mountain range that spanned the earth from her spot to the horizon. Did anything lie beyond it or was it just mountains and forest forever, as far as the earth went?
Maybe in summer, if Jules and I still live, we'll journey north. See what there is to be seen.
She turned back and continued her zig-zag hike up, cursing the Moirae and Fortuna with every step. It was windy and cold and miserable again, and all she could think about was the warm bath that she knew awaited her in the mountain.
A sound like a song came over the wind, and Yarrow frowned and looked around. It came again, like a woman singing mournfully. Damn mountain gets creepier every day.
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Nice snippet! Great characterization here. Why do I suspect something creepy is going to happen?
ReplyDeleteBecause it is...mwah ha ha ha!
DeleteWhat a way to end that snippet! I'll be back for more.
ReplyDeletelol, wonderful last line! And great descriptions in the snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery...and I have to agree...a very creepy mountain.
ReplyDeleteNice descriptions...except for the last line. Hate those mournful noises...eeks! I wonder what happens next - it can't be good.
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery, as stated before. The mountain song sounds haunting, but I definitely want to know more. Looking forward to the reveal. :)
ReplyDeleteoooo! Me thinks she best get a spurt on!!! Never trust a mountain that sings at you!
ReplyDeletereally nice snippet.
I like the descriptions you gave. Very vivid imagery! And, she shouldn't worry. It's only the wind...isn't it?
ReplyDeleteI have to hurry up and get to this book.
ReplyDeleteI approve of this sentiment! :D
DeleteNice images. I gather the waiting bath is in a cave or something?
ReplyDeleteErm sort of. There's a city/palace inside the mountain, complete with bathrooms, bedrooms, a huge kitchen. Hot running water, the works.
DeleteMmm warm bath. I love the sensory details you've included.
ReplyDeleteI like it! Great mood.
ReplyDeleteLove the description in this snippet--I could just visualize it.
ReplyDeleteGreat description--I could visualize it.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone! I'm glad you all like the snippet so much. Can't wait to see your reactions next week. *evil smile and plotting hands*
ReplyDeleteLove the description! Pulled me right in (and I would so be thinking about warm baths too!)
ReplyDeleteThe descriptions had me shivering and longing for that same hot bath. :)
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